Lovely lighting and use of the background. Maybe a tincy bit of a fill light on the front left just to bring a tiny bit of detail into the dark areas, though that's probably just me. I like to have a bit more detail at capture that I can always pull back in post.
The fake lens flare is very distracting though, I'd love to see the shot with out it (just covering it with my hand gives the image more strength). I just don't think it's needed and they never look good anyway.. Less is more and all that.
I played around with the lens flare a bit, I wanted it in the original, but it didn't quite work out as I wanted. So I added it, I think the difference is minimal, it just enhances the lighting a bit. You can see the original without it here
The fake lens flare is very distracting though, I'd love to see the shot with out it (just covering it with my hand gives the image more strength). I just don't think it's needed and they never look good anyway.. Less is more and all that.