It looks cool, it shows that you are learning some cool tricks with your camera, but it doesn't really have anything beyond that. A good photo should trigger an emotion, or get your imagination rolling. Keep at it though.
I think the clock need to be at a time like 2:32 in the morning. I say this because, this reminds me of being wide awake in the middle of the night. When its calm and dark annd you want to be sleeping but all you can do it stare at the clock. That doesnt really happen at 10:32
As said above, the picture doesn't really do anything for anyone. It's great that you are learning how to use your camera in different ways, but it's not necessary to post up your learning pictures. If you want help getting a desired effect we will be more then pleased to help. Please don't clog up the forums, and good luck in the future with photography.