The powerline is supposed to be in the first photo becuase I thought it added a bit of character to the photo but thanks for your opinions anyway. And I think I'm gonna try and photoshop the pylon out of the second shot. Also I think the pictures need to be a bit lighter. Thanks for your comments anyway and I'll post the newer pictures up when I've finished
I think if you're going to have the powerlines as a focal point in the first one, you need to be closer to the tower so it takes up a little more of the picture and looks a little more imposing, but even still the first one looks great, so does the second one.