an apple, and a night

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flag brad-maxwell
Posted: Nov 12, 2007 at 20:38 Quote
a few shots over the last few days.
what do you think

different apple pic

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this one is a long exposer, i dont know if i like it or not, i tried longer exposers but the sign kept over exposing the picture.
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and this one is a shot of the halifax commons at night
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Posted: Nov 13, 2007 at 13:39 Quote
I don't really like the focusing on the water and not the apple in the first one. I also think it would of been a bit more pleasing to see less splash. I'm not sure exactly why, but the second one doesn't do a thing for me. The third one is a nice one, though. Long Exposures are difficult, eh?
flag brad-maxwell
Posted: Nov 13, 2007 at 14:08 Quote
ya i have another one with the apple that is focused on it, il see if i can post it later on.
the second one also doesent do much for me haha, but it was one of the first attempts at long exposers of cars, harder than it looks your right.

thanks alot for the input by the way
flag raak
Posted: Nov 13, 2007 at 14:12 Quote
nice work. I like all 3 but the last one is particularly good. Nicely layed out with warm colours.
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Posted: Nov 13, 2007 at 19:14 Quote
I noticed I forgot to mention something in my original post. The third picture was taken on a roof, and you can see it. In my opinion, you should either crop it out, or re-shoot it without the roof in the composition. It would look much better. I'd also think about maybe cloning that tower crane out of the image. It's just kind of there and not doing anything for the picture..
flag brad-maxwell
Posted: Nov 13, 2007 at 20:50 Quote
i like the crane in it, and i could crop the railingout, but it would take away alot of the image, and i cant position the tripod anyother way and not get the railing in the shot and the right shot at the same time.
its shot of a balcony by the way.
still trying to get that other apple picture, deviant art is being finicky at the momment
flag bonfire
Posted: Nov 13, 2007 at 23:31 Quote
brad-maxwell wrote:
I cant position the tripod any other way and not get the railing in the shot and the right shot at the same time.
its shot of a balcony by the way.


O yes you can. I discovered these today, http://www.joby.com/ this seems like the coolest thing ever, I hope to pick one up very soon and see what comes from that.

The first one for some reason brings up some sort of primodial rage inside me, I have no idea it just really bugs me.

The second doesn't do a whole lot for me, but I like the simplicity of it, I also like the crane.

The third one is really cool, I could imagine trying to get those lights to exposure properly would be very hard.
flag frolosophy
Posted: Nov 13, 2007 at 23:34 Quote
i really like the 3rd one as well. good work, keep it up.
flag kingedd
Posted: Nov 13, 2007 at 23:56 Quote
yeh mate.pics look great
flag brad-maxwell
Posted: Nov 14, 2007 at 6:03 Quote
i meant "my" tripod, i have no cash to buy anything new at the momments sence im absolutly broke and need to start paying of my student loans in the summer
flag brad-maxwell
Posted: Nov 14, 2007 at 12:49 Quote
p.s. i changed the apple picture for you
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Posted: Nov 15, 2007 at 17:52 Quote
The apple looks better then the first one but it still doesn't do much for me...apple and water, bah.
flag brad-maxwell
Posted: Nov 15, 2007 at 18:33 Quote
alright then good to hear.
thanks
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