SMALL Vid im making

 You gotta try and come up with your own style, and not copy the Collective and other movies that have already come out. Be original with your song choices and the way you put things together, otherwise it just looks like a copy-cat. Title doesn't really help either.

 all points well made.

1: the music is not going to be what is on the clip as i sead it was put on hear for a few friends to view and have an idea of what im trying to do
2: riding is very old as the weather has not allowd us to do much filming so we have been building and riding for most of the winter (filing starts sat)
3: the title will change it is just that title as a project name not a finished product.
4: Updated Video soon ( with all your improvements)

 i think you should take pictures of your friends doing bigger jumps that will show their talent good job and the editing though

 all the footage from this is about a year or so old which is why the riding is so bad but were gunna go this weekend and do some more filming of more up to date trails and jumps

 It looked like it was going to be sweet at the begining then it just got lame with the crappy riding

 i agree you need some bigger jumps or some sick tricks

 thought the begining was wicked!

 Thanks for all your comments they are very usefull

 filming completly sucks!!!