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Two of a Kind
Something a bit different from me. A short film featuring Ross and Stuart Wilcox. Produced, direced and edited - Dominic Simmons. Co-producer - Christopher Gallagher.
facebook.com/DominicSimmonsFilms
34 Comments
- + 11
dingus
(Oct 16, 2011 at 13:19)
That was sick. Proper sick. Only criticism is that it was too short
- + 1
Getting better with each one Dom. Really impressed by your progression.
Two of the only real faults I can find is that the edit lacks flow down the trail, try link section together and provide some sort of movement or direction in one clip leading into the next.
Second is that some of those effects, how ever cool they may look, are out of place and don't really fit in, such as at 2:25.
Hope you take some of my tips on board and I look forward to seeing some more killer content from you soon!
Two of the only real faults I can find is that the edit lacks flow down the trail, try link section together and provide some sort of movement or direction in one clip leading into the next.
Second is that some of those effects, how ever cool they may look, are out of place and don't really fit in, such as at 2:25.
Hope you take some of my tips on board and I look forward to seeing some more killer content from you soon!
- + 1
Cheers Ty, I know exactly what you mean! I just thought I would do something a bit different from my normal editing. Thanks again!
- - 18
This is so good I almost faved it! Since I lost my key for the AVG (both of them now ) I can critique here...Ty is right about there being too many effects and weird shit...you're trying to follow the music so closely that it looses its flow. Also, the intro was stellar but after that the rest of the video degenerated into just some people riding their bikes. Compared to awesomeness hill-slaying on two wheels, if you know what I mean.
- + 10
No shasta, noone knows what you mean....
Dom I have watched it twice now, once before reading the comments then a second time to see if I can agree with the comments. I disagree with them but I can see where Downhill Domination is coming from. I think some of the little effects work to tie it to the music better, the little effect at 2.25 is maybe a bit questionable but it breaks up the longish clip a bit and works simply because it ties in with the symbol bash.
- + 5
lol whitetux, 99% of the critics out there couldn't create anything nearly as good as the pieces they critique. That's why they're critics and not artists!