Whip practice

 It looks like you are off to a great start. The jump also looks like a good jump to start on and practice on since it has a slight hip to it. Practice going a little further to the left and then carving back to the right on the lip. That should help you get a little more angle. I noticed you use your hips quite a bit to get your bike to move as you please. Try using your bars instead. That will allow for a more fluid looking whip. Use your bars as a guide and follow with your body. Using your bars as a guide will allow for a whip that feels less awkward too. Another tip I have is if you feel like you are going to land very sideways, put your weight behind your seat post and that will help you land with less weight on the wheel, in turn keeping you from damaging wheels and keeping you on the bike. I hope this helps you!

 you already made it a little bit.

 its a lot easier to whip on a jump with more of a hip

 Keep at it..looking good.