Grant Lestock-Kay

 Some of those static shots were getting a little irritating, I know this may sound fussy, but keep them still! They're static for a reason, avoid bumping the camera, take your hands of the camera completely well before and about 2-5 seconds after the rider had left the shot. Not only does this not rush the end of the clip, but it can leave ream for cropping. This can also be pretty cool just incase there is flying rocks, dirt or movement in the background, and if you don't want that in the final edit, all you have to do is crop it out. Saves the shot from shaking before you want the cut to take place along the clip. There was also a fair bit of noise in those shots, nothing you can really do about that but turn the shutter speed down, but that of course created blurring. Some of those slow-motion shots seemed utterly useless and boring, as if nothing much special was going on and seemed like a bit of a waste. All in all, not a bad edit, good song, riding was pretty good, and some of the angles were pretty interesting. Keep at it, don't see this as an all out assault on your edit, just a bit of constructive criticism.